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I think that your swing is decent, but it has many glaring faults that can be easily corrected. You need to remember that everything that you change need to be heavily exaggerated, and all of this can be done in front of a mirror, which I actually recommend.
1. You need to bend over more. I told sandpiper that he didn't because his swing was very upright, and 2 planish, if you going ot hardy's terms. You are more of a 1 planer, in hardy's terms, and you need to bend over more. You will get better ballstriking right away from doing this.
2. The 2nd thing is that you are WAY too flat on the backswing. Where you driver shaft should point somewhere around the ball [ pointing at the ball would be perfect ] at 9 oclock [ where your left arm is parallel to the ground ], yours is pointing across the street somewhere. There are many ways to do this, namingly one that charnock said in feeling the clubface be closed towards the ball [ even though I'd add throughout the whole swing ], but because I've struggled with this same thing, I've found something that I felt worked much better. It also basically makes you have a very good backswing [ 1ps ] and gets the club much more upright [ if anything, too upright, which is much better than too flat ], and all you have to think about is your right forearm and elbow!
First, you will have to star the club back the first few feet before you can do these things [ or else you'd take your right elbow into your right hip! ]. Then [ actually looking at the vid, you sort of already do this, but here it goes ] you feel sort of a lawnmower full, the right elbow goes straight back. The main thing here is that you need to keep the hands very quiet, I always think about keeping the cup in my left wrist if I'm struggling with this. If you do it correctly, when the SHAFT of the club is parallel to the ground, it'll be inside your toe line, and the clubface will be CLOSED [ how much depending on how bent over you are ]. You can see this done extremely well on brady riggs site [ if you dont' have the pass, get it, its a great site ]
http://redgoat.smugmug.com/index.mg?UserID=6397&offered=yes& with peter jacobson.
From this point, its very simple [ like the last one wasnt'!! ]. You just feel your elbow go straight up [ because hopefully, you've already taken it back pretty far ], and at the same time your right FOREARM rotating. This is done in one single motion. The right forearm rotation will get the club on plane, if you didn't have it, the club would be almost vertical. You keep rotating until the top, and remember, if you aren't to parallel, you should be layed off.
The toughest thing about it is blending it together once you feel the positions. I know thats alot of words, for really what is very simple, but I didnt' wanna leave any details out. To be quiet simple, you just pull your elbow back, then at the same time go up with it [ its going to feel very vertical ] and rotate the right forearm. That's it. You will then have a very good backswing, and will never be too flat again [ as long as you don't rotate the hell out of that forearm ]. Hopefully you read all of this!
Those are the 2 main things that you can fix very quickly. You do get a little crazy with the hips, sort of a colin Montgomerie thing. After you get those 2 things done, I'd really focus on making a good turn. It's hard to get power with that hip slide that you have. Here is another vid of 2 good swings that you can get a few things from
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2YajzPc03HY .
Anyway, hope that helps!!